If you want to send me the next installment, you certainly would be more than welcome, I only found punctuation really in the first draft, nothing that no normal beta wouldn't catch. :P
I am starved for some goodfic, even though I've made some good fic of my own in my RL, with my somewhat-Simmy-lookalike :P
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Date: 2010-06-04 09:09 pm (UTC)I am starved for some goodfic, even though I've made some good fic of my own in my RL, with my somewhat-Simmy-lookalike :P